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2014-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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the/- -/the only a few/some each many the south big dolpines live in jeju. I have seen the dolpines near the u-do. It looks like a giant fish ball(?). It was wonderful.

강사 첨삭

Good evening TOM! Yahoo! You did a marvelous job again. Wow! I envy you! Hihihi. The last time I saw a dolphin was years ago. Thank you for sharing this marvelous experience. I hope that you will have a great night. Talk to you tomorrow. Great job! Work on your sentence pattern and choice of words. You can do it.Teacher Nina   the/->> Correct-/the >> A, Correctonly a few/some >> Correcteach >> most many >> much the south big dolpines live in jeju. >> The south big dolphins live in Jeju. I have seen the dolpines near the u-do. >> I have seen dolphins near U-do. It looks like a giant fish ball(?). >> Did you mean: It looks like a giant ball of fish. >> OR: It is big kind of fish.It was wonderful. >> Correct

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