Homework

Good evening [이름]!
Happy Wednesday. Hihihihi! I think I can\'t wait.

Thank you for doing your essay tonight.

That\'s a great attitude in learning.

Don\'t give up! Yes, it is not enough for a determined person like you.
I love your determination. ^^
I agree with you, dealing depression on our own is good but we also need others to make us feel better.

Always remember, teacher is also here for you. Talk to you tomorrow.

Have a wonderful evening, Take Care!

Teacher Nina

Hello teacher Nina.

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This topic is \'What could someone do to encourage you when you feel depressed?\'

>> The topic is \"What could someone do to encourage you when you feel depressed?\"

Usually when I feel depressed, I tend to endure alone.

>> Usually when I feel depressed, I tend to endure it alone.
I think what make me depressed is mine so that I deal with it myself.

>> I think about what made me feel depressed so I deal with it by myself.
So when I feel depressed, I try not to show my feeling.

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But I am a person who show my feeling easily on face.

>> But I am a person who shows my feelings easily through facial expressions.
Because of it, my people sometimes sense that I am depressed.

>> Because of it, the people around me sometimes sense that I am depressed.
At that time, they tell me about what happend to me recently before I tell them.

>> Correct ( spelling check: happened ^^)
Their kindness encourages me.

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I think I am lucky because I have many really good people.

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>> OR: I think I am lucky because I have a lot of good people around me.
Well, actually my ex-boyfriend didn\'t say anything and just held me tight in his arms when I feel depressed.

>> Well, actually my ex-boyfriend didn\'t say anything and just held me tight in his arms when I felt depressed.

>> OR: Well, actually my ex-boyfriend don\'t say anything and just hold me tight in his arms when I feel depressed.
It might be better to feel better immediately than talking about what make me depressed.

>> Did you mean: It might be good to feel better immediately rather than talking about that which made me depressed.
Sometimes I miss someone\'s hug.

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On a second thought, I can deal with my feeling alone!

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>> OR: On a second thought, I can deal with my feelings by myself.

I want to say more but I used all of the space given to me :(

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1000 words is too little. (I\'m not sure \'little\' is proper)

>> One thousand words is not enough for me. ^_^
Anyway, Bye!

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