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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
Well, what a combination!
Mansour\'s wealth, Jung Woosung\'s appearance, and the Pope\'s intelligence.
You would really be the most perfect man in the world.
Where on earth did you get that idea Mr. [이름]? hahaha
And for you information, I have a crush on Jung Woo sung. Oh my GODDDD!!!
He is one of the actors whom I like very much. kkk
Anyway, having that kind of dream in not bad at all. So keep on dreaming then! ;)
See you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Since Mr. [Name] has taken over \'Manchester city\' which of the premier league football team in England, he is a well known rich in Korea.
>> Since Mr. [Name] has taken over \'Manchester city\' which of the premier league football team in England, he is a well known rich man in Korea.
Moreover, Man City won the Premier League cup title.
>> correct!
It makes him more famouse.
>> correct! (famous)
>> or; It made him more famous.
We say that he was born with biting a gold spoon.
>> We say that he was born with a golden spoon in his mouth.
He is one of the luckiest guy in the world.
>> correct!
If I could use his identity, I would donate a big money to charity and make a shelter for the homeless.
>> correct!
>> or: If I could use his identity, I would donate a huge amount of money to the charity and I would make shelter for the homeless.
I admire his money, but I do not respect him.
>> correct!
And, I have one more wish.
>> correct!
If possible, I hope to be born Jung Woosung in my next life.
>> If possible, I hope that I would be born as Jung Woosung in my next life.
I do not care, even if I would be a homeless and a begger in my next life.
>> I do not care even if I would be homeless or a beggar in my next life.
I could enjoy that all women would be totally enraptured by my attraction.
>> I could enjoy all the women I want and they would be allured to me since I am attractive.
Even I jealous him.
>> I am even jealous of him.
But, all women thank God.
>> correct!
And, they get healing as watching him.
>> And they could even be healed by just watching him.
The pope is a great person.
>> correct!
I like his character and respect his mind and behavior.
>> I like his character and I respect his mind and behavior.
So, I would have Mansour\'s money, Jungwoosung\'s appearance & the pope\'s mind.
>> correct!
It would be the most perfect guy in the woruld.
>> I would be the most perfect guy in the world.
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