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2014-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I think life is about existence. Because each life is important. And it is hard to explain what life is about. But I'm sure that life is important.

강사 첨삭

Hi TOM!!! Happy hump day! Thank you for trying your best to explain your thoughts. I am so glad that you are becoming more conscious with your sentences. Great! You are right, life is important. We should value our life. Talk to you soon. Teacher NIna   I think life is about existence. >> Correct >> OR: I think life is all about existence. Because each life is important. >> Correct >> OR: Because every person\'s life is vital. And it is hard to explain what life is about. >> CorrectBut I\'m sure that life is important. >> Correct

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