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Composition Writing: Describe one time when you were brave. (Write a maximum of 2 paragraphs. The word 'brave' describe me well. I do not usually get scared. The most brave day I remember was when I was elementry student. I went to camp and the last night we had to do scary mission. Our team had to go house that no one lives in, and had to get something that teacher hide. We had to walk along the path very dark and sclient. We cannot see anything without lamp. While walking we were very scared, and finally we did reach the house. However, nobody don't want to go inside even the boys who were older than me. So, I decided to go inside by myself. I did it, and I came out with certification. I was very brave and I am still proud of it.

 Hi [이름]! Wonderful job in describing a time when you were brave. ^^ If you compare your homework to the corrections I have made, you will notice that the sentences have the same meaning. ^^ This is how English works, you can say one thing in a million ways that is why building up your vocabulary and grammar is very important. Anyway, again, you did a fantastic job and I want you to always try hard. ^^ All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   The word \'brave\' describe me well. >> CORRECT  I do not usually get scared. >> CORRECT The most brave day I remember was when I was elementry student. >> My bravest moment I can remember was when I was an elementary student.  I went to camp and the last night we had to do scary mission. >> I went to camp and on the last night, we had to do a scary activity. Our team had to go house that no one lives in, and had to get something that teacher hide. >> Our team had to go to an abandoned house to find something that the teachers hid there. We had to walk along the path very dark and sclient. >> We had to walk along a path that was very dark and silent. We cannot see anything without lamp. >> We cannot see a thing without a lamp. While walking we were very scared, and finally we did reach the house. >> CORRECT However, nobody don\'t want to go inside even the boys who were older than me. >> However, nobody wanted to go inside, even the boys who were older than me! So, I decided to go inside by myself. >> CORRECT I did it, and I came out with certification. >> CORRECT I was very brave and I am still proud of it. >> CORRECT