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Essay: Do you think your country has an effective education system? I think my country has an effective education system. Some people think our education system is not good. Well, it is true that our country's education system is not focus on creative. However, I think except that it is very effective education system. During the school days, We learn many things, because of our education system. Our school teach many knowledge. Some students doesn't like it because we have to study a lot.In this way, however, I think we can learn many things on schol days. So, All the people in our country have common knowledge. Also our education system is effective because it make us learn by memorizing. Some people thinks memorizing is bad, but I don't think so. Sometime memorizing is very effective. We have to memorize some basic knowledge, because it helps to learn harder knowledge and to solve difficult problems. For these reason, I think our education system is effective.

Good morning [이름]! Thank you for being diligent in doing all your homework. Please go over my corrections. Have a nice day! ~t. Kelly^^ Essay: Do you think your country has an effective education system?I think my country has an effective education system. >> Correct. Some people think our education system is not good. >> Correct. Well, it is true that our country\'s education system is not focus on creative. >> Well, it is true that our country\'s education system is not focus on creativity. However, I think except that it is very effective education system. >> However, I think that we have an effective education system except in terms of creativity.During the school days, We learn many things, because of our education system. >> During school days, we learn many things because of our education system. Our school teach many knowledge. >> Our school teaches us many things. Some students doesn\'t like it because we have to study a lot. >> Correct. In this way, however, I think we can learn many things on schol days. >> On the other hand, we can only learn many things in this way. So, All the people in our country have common knowledge. >> So, all people in our country have a common knowledge. Also our education system is effective because it make us learn by memorizing. >> Also our education system is effective because it makes us learn by memorization. Some people thinks memorizing is bad, but I don\'t think so. >> Some people think memorizing is bad, but I don\'t think so. Sometime memorizing is very effective. >> Sometime memorization is very effective. We have to memorize some basic knowledge, because it helps to learn harder knowledge and to solve difficult problems. >> We have to memorize some basic knowledge, because it helps us learn more difficult things and to solve difficult problems. For these reason, I think our education system is effective. >> For these reasons, I think our education system is effective.