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2014-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Essay: Do you think writing email has strengthened or weakened people's writing skills? I think writing email has strengthened people's writing skills. Some people think writing email reduced hand writing mail, and weakened people's writing skills. It also destroy grammer or spelling to write faster online. However, I dont think it weakend people's writing. Remind when you write email. We check our mistake of grammer or spelling. We write email sincerely, so we try to write as same format as when we write on paper. Also, if we get used to writing email, it reduces time on writing. Because short time takes writing one email, we can write many email than when we write on paper. The more we write, the more we can pratice writing. And it will strength writing skills. For these reason, I think writing email has strenghtened peopl's writing skills.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!Thank you for sharing your thoughts and ideas about the essay. I hope that you will not stop in improving your English skills as well.  Take care and see you tomorrow~ ~Kelly^^ Essay: Do you think writing email has strengthened or weakened people\'s writing skills?I think writing email has strengthened people\'s writing skills. >> Correct. Some people think writing email reduced hand writing mail, and weakened people\'s writing skills. >>Some people think that writing an email reduced snail mails, and weakened people\'s writing skills. It also destroy grammer or spelling to write faster online. >> It also weakens a person\'s grammar and writing skills. However, I dont think it weakend people\'s writing. >> However, I dont think it weakend people\'s writing ability.Remind when you write email. >> Be reminded that when you write e-mail.. We check our mistake of grammer or spelling. >>We check for grammar or spelling error. We write email sincerely, so we try to write as same format as when we write on paper. >> We write e-mail sincerely and we use the same format as when we write on paper. Also, if we get used to writing email, it reduces time on writing. >> Also, if we get used to writing an email, we can save time. Because short time takes writing one email, we can write many email than when we write on paper. >>Because it takes a lesser time to write an e-mail than writing on paper. The more we write, the more we can pratice writing. >>The more we write, the more we can improve our skill. And it will strength writing skills. >> And it will strengthen our writing skills. For these reason, I think writing email has strenghtened peopl\'s writing skills. >> For these reasons, I think writing email has strenghtened people\'s writing skills.

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