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Hi teacher Nina!
Can I say 'Hi' instead of 'Hello' because I feel very familiar to you? :)
Now it's 2:25 AM in Korea.
I can't sleep because I have a toothache. I think it's because of a wisdom tooth.
At yesterday's morning, I felt very little toothache near a left bottom molar.
I thought it isn't serious. But the pain is increasing more and more.
The wisdom thooth even don't come out yet :(
Anyway, This topic is 'What factors are important to you when choosing a book to read?'
Well, there is no time that I think I have any criterion when I choose a book to read.
Actually I have a list of the book that I want to read.
And when I finish to read a book, I choose a next book in the list.
There are always about five books in the list.
When someone recommends a book to me, new book written by my favorite writer is published, I watch the advertisement of a book and want to read it and so on, whenever I find a book that I want to read, I put it on the list and read it later!
강사 첨삭
HI [이름]!
Good afternoon.
I\'m sorry to hear about your condition.
I hope you feel better now.
Do you take medicines when you feel pain?
I usually do it in order for me to sleep.
Thanks for doing your essay. Can\'t wait to talk to you.Take care!
Teacher Nina
Hi teacher Nina!
>> Correct! Can I say \'Hi\' instead of \'Hello\' because I feel very familiar to you? :)>> Correct!
Now it\'s 2:25 AM in Korea.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Now, it\'s two twenty five in the morning here in Korea. I can\'t sleep because I have a toothache.
>> Correct!
I think it\'s because of a wisdom tooth.
>> I think it\'s because of my wisdom tooth. At yesterday\'s morning, I felt very little toothache near a left bottom molar.
>> Yesterday morning, I felt some pain on my left molar tooth. I thought it isn\'t serious.
>> Correct!
But the pain is increasing more and more.
>> Correct!
>> OR: But the pain is becoming worse. The wisdom thooth even don\'t come out yet :(>> My wisdom tooth didn\'t grow yet.
Anyway, This topic is \'What factors are important to you when choosing a book to read?\'>> Correct!
Well, there is no time that I think I have any criterion when I choose a book to read.
>> Did you mean: Well, there\'s isn\'t any time that I think that I have a criteria when I choose a book to read. Actually I have a list of the book that I want to read.
>> Actually, I have a list of the books that I want to read. And when I finish to read a book, I choose a next book in the list.
>> And when I finished reading a book, I choose the next on the list. There are always about five books in the list.
>> Correct! When someone recommends a book to me, new book written by my favorite writer is published, I watch the advertisement of a book and want to read it and so on,
>> When someone recommends a book to me, new book written by my favorite writer is published, I watch the advertisement of the book and want to read it and so on.
whenever I find a book that I want to read, I put it on the list and read it later!
>> Correct!
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