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2014-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hi teacher Nina! Can I say 'Hi' instead of 'Hello' because I feel very familiar to you? :) Now it's 2:25 AM in Korea. I can't sleep because I have a toothache. I think it's because of a wisdom tooth. At yesterday's morning, I felt very little toothache near a left bottom molar. I thought it isn't serious. But the pain is increasing more and more. The wisdom thooth even don't come out yet :( Anyway, This topic is 'What factors are important to you when choosing a book to read?' Well, there is no time that I think I have any criterion when I choose a book to read. Actually I have a list of the book that I want to read. And when I finish to read a book, I choose a next book in the list. There are always about five books in the list. When someone recommends a book to me, new book written by my favorite writer is published, I watch the advertisement of a book and want to read it and so on, whenever I find a book that I want to read, I put it on the list and read it later!

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HI [이름]! Good afternoon. I\'m sorry to hear about your condition. I hope you feel better now. Do you take medicines when you feel pain? I usually do it in order for me to sleep. Thanks for doing your essay. Can\'t wait to talk to you.Take care! Teacher Nina   Hi teacher Nina! >> Correct! Can I say \'Hi\' instead of \'Hello\' because I feel very familiar to you? :)>> Correct! Now it\'s 2:25 AM in Korea. >> Correct! >> OR: Now, it\'s two twenty five in the morning here in Korea. I can\'t sleep because I have a toothache. >> Correct! I think it\'s because of a wisdom tooth. >> I think it\'s because of my wisdom tooth. At yesterday\'s morning, I felt very little toothache near a left bottom molar. >> Yesterday morning, I felt some pain on my left molar tooth. I thought it isn\'t serious. >> Correct!  But the pain is increasing more and more. >> Correct! >> OR: But the pain is becoming worse. The wisdom thooth even don\'t come out yet :(>> My wisdom tooth didn\'t grow yet. Anyway, This topic is \'What factors are important to you when choosing a book to read?\'>> Correct! Well, there is no time that I think I have any criterion when I choose a book to read. >> Did you mean: Well, there\'s isn\'t any time that I think that I have a criteria when I choose a book to read. Actually I have a list of the book that I want to read. >> Actually, I have a list of the books that I want to read. And when I finish to read a book, I choose a next book in the list. >> And when I finished reading a book, I choose the next on the list. There are always about five books in the list. >> Correct! When someone recommends a book to me, new book written by my favorite writer is published, I watch the advertisement of a book and want to read it and so on, >> When someone recommends a book to me, new book written by my favorite writer is published, I watch the advertisement of the book and want to read it and so on. whenever I find a book that I want to read, I put it on the list and read it later! >> Correct!

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