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Hello [이름],

Try to keep your sentences simple first before going to the complex ones in order to improve faster. :) I know you\'re very much aware of your grammar and sentence structure so I need you to apply that when speaking. ^^
Have a wonderful day! See you in class!

T. Jeny

my favorite book is ‘demian’.

>>My favorite book is \"Demian\".
 ‘demian’ author is \'Hermann Hesse\'

>>Demain\'s author is \'Hermann Hesse\'.
 ‘demian’ describe our childhood .

>>Demain describes our childhood.
 that story is what we want to forget childhood problem.

>>The story wants us not to forget our childhood problem.
 and that book show our processing we overcome childhood problem.

>>The book teaches us how to solve and overcome our childhood problem.
 show that processing we grow that called \'the men\'.

>>The process will help us become a man.
 if we read that book, we remind our grown process. 

>>If  we read this book, we will be reminded of our growth.
 therefore we will more consider other people.

>>Therefore, we will learn to consider other people.