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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: *ESSAY: In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. In our country ,teenagers also hava jobs to make thier money. I think, they don't want to have jobs but they have no enough money to spend. Some of teenagers even make his living by themselves. That's the reason teenager students have their job. But i disagree with this situations. Because they have to study hard and think about their future in depth during their school days. To avoid this situations, our adults should give great attention nationally.

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Thursday! ^^   In the Philippines, we also have this kind of situation. However, in my case, I didn\'t experience this. I somehow envy people who worked to earn money when they were teens.   By the way, I want to say EXCELLENT! ^^ You have expressed your idea very well! However, you need to check the corrections and suggestions below to have a better composition.   Well, as a whole, you made a great homework! ^^ See you later! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:*ESSAY: In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.In our country ,teenagers also hava jobs to make thier money. >> In our country, teenagers also have jobs to make their money. (PROPER SPACING & SPELLING) >> OR: In our country, teenagers also get jobs to make their own money. I think, they don\'t want to have jobs but they have no enough money to spend.>> I think they don\'t want to have jobs, but they have no enough money to spend. (PROPER PUNCTUATION) >> OR: I think they don\'t want to have jobs, but they don\'t have enough money to spend. Some of teenagers even make his living by themselves.>> Some teenagers even make their living by themselves. That\'s the reason teenager students have their job. >> That\'s the reason why teenagers have their jobs. (COMPLETE THE SENTENCE) >> OR: That\'s the reason why teenagers have jobs in Korea. But i disagree with this situations.>> However, I disagree with this situation, (PROPER ADVERB) Because they have to study hard and think about their future in depth during their school days.>> It is because they have to study hard and think about their future in depth during their school days. (COMPLETE THE SENTENCE) >> OR: It is because they have to concentrate on studying hard and thinking about their future in depth during their school days. To avoid this situations, our adults should give great attention nationally. >> CORRECT!