Homework

*ESSAY: Introduce yourself to a pen friend. What will you tell him or her? Dear [Name].Paula Hi. my name is [이름]. How are you? I am so glad to write you this letter. I hope i can keep touch with you long time. First of all, let me introduce myself. I am in my early thirties. And i have been working at trading company for 6years. I make a decision to study English lately to improve my language skill. I really want to speak well in English like speaking Chinese. Pls help me to make it. ^^ Keep in touch! bye~

Dear Ms. [이름], ^.^   Happy Thursday! It\'s a lovely day, isn\'t it! ^^   I received your letter, and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for introducing yourself to me through writing. To start, let me tell you my name. I am [Name]. I live in Baguio City, Philippines. I am living with my family. Originally, we are six in the family. My older sister got married already. I finished Bachelor of Secondary Education major in Mathematics at University of the Cordilleras. I am presently working as an ESL Online Teacher at PowerEnglish. I love my job. I also love swimming, hiking and playing bowling. I like doing a lot of stuff. I can\'t really describe myself.   By the way, don\'t worry because I will do my best to help you learn and study English. That\'s it for now! ^^ See you!!! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: Kindly check the corrections and suggestions below. Good job! I like the way you introduce yourself from this composition! ^^ Keep it up! ^^     *ESSAY: Introduce yourself to a pen friend. What will you tell him or her?Dear [Name].Paula>> Dear [Name]. [Name], (SPACING) Hi. >> CORRECT! >> OR: BETTER: Hi! my name is [이름]. >> My name is [이름]. (CAPITALIZATION) >> OR: I am [이름]. >> OR: I am [Name]. [이름]. How are you? >> CORRECT! >> OR: How have you been? I am so glad to write you this letter.>> CORRECT! I hope i can keep touch with you long time. >> I hope I can keep in touch with you for a long time. (CAPITALIZATION & SENTENCE STRUCTURE) First of all, let me introduce myself. >> CORRECT! I am in my early thirties. >> CORRECT! And i have been working at trading company for 6years. >> In addition, I have been working at a trading company for 6 years. (PROPER ADVERB, SENTENCE STRUCTURE & SPACING) I make a decision to study English lately to improve my language skill.>> I have made a decision to study English lately to improve my language skills. (PLURALIZATION) >> OR: I have come up with the decision to study English lately to improve my language skills. I really want to speak well in English like speaking Chinese. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I really like to speak in English well like speaking Chinese. Pls help me to make it. ^^>> CORRECT! Keep in touch!  >> Let\'s keep in touch! bye~ >> Bye ~ >> BETTER: Bye!