Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello teacher Nina!
I searched the meaning of 'T.G.I.F' and laughed.
At waiting for a friday, everyone in the wolrd is the same!
You know what? Actually there is a class among clsses that I take this semester.
The class is given by a professor who does every his class in only English.
I took his class also last year and two years before because I had to take the subjects.
In the class, I was always worried about the thing that he ask me something.
When he did, my head went blank, I can't say anything and some sentence that I barely said are totally messy.
BUT after I began to receive your help, altought I were still nervous I became to make a sentence more smoothly!
I want to tell you that I can improve because of you :)
THANK YOU!
And, This is my homework.
1. The whole army is out of step except Fred.
2. I'll accept no money from that cheapskate.
3. Please accept this pot of Mama's chicken soup.
Oh..I used all words given to me again :(
I will do the rest of my homework soon!
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Thank you for your appreciation. I am doing everything on my end to help you.
I am glad that you are more confident now.That\'s a great attitude. Don\'t ever feel bad when you commit mistakes.
It is because you are going to learn from it.
Good job! I already made the necessary corrections below.
I hope that you will feel better soon. Don\'t forget to put a cold compress when it is painful.
Have a great night.
Teacher Nina
Hello teacher Nina!
>> CORRECT! I searched the meaning of \'T.G.I.F\' and laughed.
>> CORRECT! At waiting for a friday, everyone in the wolrd is the same!
>> Did you mean: While waiting for Friday, everyone in the world is the same. ( spelling check: world ^^) You know what?
>> CORRECT!
Actually there is a class among clsses that I take this semester.
>> Did you mean: Actually, there is a class that I am taking this semester. The class is given by a professor who does every his class in only English.
>> The class is led by a professor who does everything in English. I took his class also last year and two years before because I had to take the subjects.
>> I took his class two years ago and last year because I needed to.
>> OR: I took his class several times becuase I had to take it. In the class, I was always worried about the thing that he ask me something.
>> During the class, I was always worried about the thing he asks me.
>> OR: During the class, I am always worried about his questions. When he did, my head went blank, I can\'t say anything and some sentence that I barely said are totally messy.
>> Did you mean: When he asked me a question, I had mental block. I wasn\'t able to say anything.
>> OR: When he asked me a question, I didn\'t remember anything so I tried. My sentences were not good. BUT after I began to receive your help, altought I were still nervous I became to make a sentence more smoothly!
>> Did you mean: But after I began receiving your help. although I am still nervous I was able to compose sentences smoothly.>> OR: But since I started having your class, even though I am still nervous I was able to share my ideas clearly, I want to tell you that I can improve because of you :)
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I want to tell you that I can improve my skills because of you. THANK YOU!>> CORRECT!
And, This is my homework.>> CORRECT!
1. The whole army is out of step except Fred.
>> CORRECT! 2. I\'ll accept no money from that cheapskate.
>> CORRECT! 3. Please accept this pot of Mama\'s chicken soup.>> CORRECT!
Oh..I used all words given to me again :(
>> Oh! I used all of the space given to me.>> OR: Oh! I maximized that space again. I will do the rest of my homework soon!
>> CORRECT!
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