homework

Hi [이름]! ^.^

Happy Monday! ^^

You did a fantastic writing.

It is just you still need to be careful with the capitalization of words.

When you give a general thought, it is better not to focus on one person.

You should also take note your punctuations and the structure of your sentences.

Anyway, as a whole, you did great! ^^

See you later! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

In my opinion, The earth is being demaged by human activity.
>> In my opinion, the Earth is being damaged by human activities. (CAPITALIZATION & PLURALIZATION.

The more activity human does, the more damaged the earth is.
>> The  more activity human does, the more damaged the Earth is. (CAPITALIZATION)

>> OR: The  more activities human does, the more damaged the Earth is.

There are a lot of developments going on and these are destroying our earth.
>> There are a lot of developments going on, and these are destroying our Earth. (CAPITALIZATION & PUNCTUATION)

>> OR: There are a lot of developments going on, and these are destroying our Mother Earth.

Indeed, human is suffering from enviromental problems due to indiscriminate development.
>> Indeed, human is suffering from environmental problems due to indiscriminate development. (SPELLING)

>> BETTER: Indeed, human is suffering from environmental problems due to indiscriminate developments.

Global warming is the most urgnet problem the human is facing.
>> Global warming is the most serious problem that needs urgent solution the human is facing. (SPELLING & SENTENCE STRUCTURE)

We must pay attention for this issue as quickly as possible, otherwise we won\'t be able to survive in our earth.

>> We must pat attention for this issue to this issue as quickly as possible. Otherwise, we won\'t be able to survive in this world. (SENTENCE STRUCTURE)