Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Su Jin,
great job on your answers. Just review the minor corrections I have for you. All three questions have very impressive answers, just be careful with the grammar part. Thanks and see you in class!
Teacher Verna =)
1. People said, I'm not much resemble my parents. But when I go to somewhere with my little sister or brother, people said, you're so resemble your sister or brother.
>>> People say I don’t resemble my parents much. But when I go somewhere with my little sister or brother, people say you resemble your sister or brother much
2. My parents always told me that Do not steal anything and Do not hit your friends without good reason. They also taught me you must get along with your sisters.
>>> My parents always told me not to steal anything and not to hit my friends without good reason. They also taught me that I must get along with my sisters.
3. When I was middle school student, I went to an amusement [이름]. My father was always busy but I had a chance so we went to the [이름]. I think it's the best memory I have.
>>> When I was middle school student, I went to an amusement [이름]. My father was always busy but we had the chance so we went to the [이름]. I think it's the best memory I have.
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