HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay: Does the weather affect your mood?
Answer in 5 sentences.
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Normally I don't care a weather conditions.
In other words, the weather doesn't affect my mood but I feel inconvenient in case of rainning.
Especially it's very inconvenient to bring umbrella when I commute.
However sometimes getting wet under the rain makes me so fresh during summer.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday my dearest Mr. B A N G!
Hope you had a very wonderful weekend. I do hope you also took a lot of rest to prepare yourself for another tiring weekday! kkk (^o^)
I wanna hear your stories later in class. See you later!
Have a great day ahead!!
Be happy always!!!
~Teacher Myra
Normally I don\'t care a weather conditions.
>>Normally, I don\'t care about the weather conditions.
In other words, the weather doesn\'t affect my mood but I feel inconvenient in case of rainning.
>>In other words, the weather doesn\'t affect my mood, but I feel inconvenient in case of raining. (please check your spelling Mr. [이름]^^)
OR>>...but I feel inconvenient whenever it rains.
Especially it\'s very inconvenient to bring umbrella when I commute.
>>CORRECT
However sometimes getting wet under the rain makes me so fresh during summer.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Getting soaked in the rain makes me freshened up during summer.
Hope you had a very wonderful weekend. I do hope you also took a lot of rest to prepare yourself for another tiring weekday! kkk (^o^)
I wanna hear your stories later in class. See you later!
Have a great day ahead!!
Be happy always!!!
~Teacher Myra
Normally I don\'t care a weather conditions.
>>Normally, I don\'t care about the weather conditions.
In other words, the weather doesn\'t affect my mood but I feel inconvenient in case of rainning.
>>In other words, the weather doesn\'t affect my mood, but I feel inconvenient in case of raining. (please check your spelling Mr. [이름]^^)
OR>>...but I feel inconvenient whenever it rains.
Especially it\'s very inconvenient to bring umbrella when I commute.
>>CORRECT
However sometimes getting wet under the rain makes me so fresh during summer.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Getting soaked in the rain makes me freshened up during summer.
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