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Essay: If you could change your job or profession, what would you do?
If I could change my job or profession, I want to major psychology.

>> If I could change my job or profession, I would like to major in Psychology.

Since I was highschool student, I thought psychology is very interesting study.

>> Since I was a high school student, I have thought that Psychology is a very interesting study.

It is so attractive because it can help people who were having hard time.

>> It is so attractive because it can help people who are having a hard time.

When I was highschool student, sometime I helped my friend by listening to their problems and help them find soultion.

>> When I was a high school student, I sometimes helped my friend by listening to their problems and helped them find a solution.

It made not only my friend happy but also me.

>> It made me and my friends happy.

I thought sympathizing with a person and trying to get soultion together is awesome job to do.

>> I thought sympathizing with a person and trying to find a solution to his problem is an awesome job to do.

It might be hard to get someone\'s mind, but I will be proud of myself after helping tho them.

>> It might be not be easy to understand what\'s in a person\'s mind, but I feel proud of myself in helping other people.

So, if there is chance to change my profession, I want to study psychology to help others.

>> So, if there is chance to change my profession, I want to study Psychology to help others.