homework
학생이 쓴 원문
yes of course.There should be a limit about sending text.
These days so many people send a lot of text.
For example,There are KaKao Talf and KaKao story.
Sending text is good but sending lots of texts are bad.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom^^
Happy Monday. ^^
Thank you for sending this in.^^
You are right! There should be a limit in sending text messages sometimes.
It\'s irritating sometimes when we receive a lot.
And of course, for enrolling again in my class.
Please tell your parents that techer is so thankful. ^^
I hope that you will continue learning the language with me.
Please go over the corrections below. ^^
Teacher Nina
yes of course.
>> CORRECT!
There should be a limit about sending text.
>> There should be a limit in sending text messages. These days so many people send a lot of text.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: These days, there are so many people who send a lot of SMS. For example,There are KaKao Talf and KaKao story.
>> For example, there are Kakao Talk and Kakao story. Sending text is good but sending lots of texts are bad.
>> Did you mean: Sending text is good but sending a lot are bad.
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