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2014-09-30 · 첨삭 강사 Barbara

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The besy wat for me to cure homesickness is to focus on what you're doing now.When I went to Britain,I once had a dream that my other relatives were rushing to my house.After having that dream,I tried my best to avoid looking at those pictures I took back home.And just focused on what I'm ding now,and all those homesickness were over.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!   Thanks for sending your composition. Yes, it is true. You just need to focus and keep yourself busy. Sometimes, it\'s also good to make a call to your love ones. Different people experience homesickness differently and cope with it in different ways.   T. Barbara**,   The besy wat for me to cure homesickness is to focus on what you\'re doing now. >> The best way for me to cure homesickness is to focus on what you\'re doing now. When I went to Britain,I once had a dream that my other relatives were rushing to my house. >> When I went to Britain, I once had a dream that my relatives were rushing to my house. After having that dream,I tried my best to avoid looking at those pictures I took back home. >> After having that dream, I tried my best to avoid looking at those pictures I took back home.  And just focused on what I\'m ding now,and all those homesickness were over. >> And just focused on what I\'m doing now, and all those homesickness were over.  

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