Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
The besy wat for me to cure homesickness is to focus on what you're doing now.When I went to Britain,I once had a dream that my other relatives were rushing to my house.After having that dream,I tried my best to avoid looking at those pictures I took back home.And just focused on what I'm ding now,and all those homesickness were over.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for sending your composition.
Yes, it is true.
You just need to focus and keep yourself busy.
Sometimes, it\'s also good to make a call to your love ones.
Different people experience homesickness differently and cope with it in different ways.
T. Barbara**,
The besy wat for me to cure homesickness is to focus on what you\'re doing now.
>> The best way for me to cure homesickness is to focus on what you\'re doing now.
When I went to Britain,I once had a dream that my other relatives were rushing to my house.
>> When I went to Britain, I once had a dream that my relatives were rushing to my house.
After having that dream,I tried my best to avoid looking at those pictures I took back home.
>> After having that dream, I tried my best to avoid looking at those pictures I took back home.
And just focused on what I\'m ding now,and all those homesickness were over.
>> And just focused on what I\'m doing now, and all those homesickness were over.
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