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Hello [이름],

Thank you for your essay but I quite confuse with your main topic. I can grasp your main idea however I commend you for writing and essay. I know this is a good practice for you.

Take care!!!

T. Jeny

boats is can stay in the sea a long time

>>Boats can stay on the sea for a long time.
that possible is the man gain more food and more land.

>>It is possible for man to gain more food and land.
land was very powerful in the past.

>>Having a property means power in the past.
land was most importance if plants could grow.

>>We need land for plants to grow.
and buying plants were very expensive and very small quantity

>>Buying a plant is quite expensive with a very small quantity.