homework

*ESSAY: It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer. I don't support the plan that a new high school may be built in our communitiy. There are enough high schools in our community and all schools are managed well witout any problems. I think, it is a waste of taxpayer's money for the government to be built a new school in our community. We should rather consider how to improve the preivious school's system better. That's why there is no reason to build a new high school any more.

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Tuesday! ^^   Day-by-day, you are improving. Your composition now is better than your  writings before. I enjoyed reading it.   Anyway, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below. See you! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     I don\'t support the plan that a new high school may be built in our communitiy. >> I don\'t support the plan that a new high school may be built in our community.There are enough high schools in our community and all schools are managed well witout any problems. >> There are enough high schools in our community, and all of them are managed well without any problems. I think, it is a waste of taxpayer\'s money for the government to be built a new school in our community. >> I think it is a waste of taxpayers\' money for the government to build a new school in our community. We should rather consider how to improve the preivious school\'s system better. >> We should rather consider how to improve the previous schools\' system. >> BETTER: We should rather consider ways on how to improve the previous schools\' system. >> OR: We should rather consider the improvement of the previous schools\' system. That\'s why there is no reason to build a new high school any more. >> That\'s why there is no reason to build a new high school anymore.