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Hello there Jessie.
Whew, it is quiet hard to get up on time on morning. haha
I'm surprised when time isn't what I expected.
I hope we can talk each other longer in this time.
See you soon :D
<Esaay>
I can't say beauty is irrelevant with one's success actually. Many people discriminate with beauty though even they do not know anything about a person they're seeing. It's quiet unfair but there's nothing we can do for this actually I guess.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
I understand why you are having difficulty cause I feel the same way.hahha
I totally agree with your opinion, this is what is happening in our society.
Even if we know it shouldn\'t be like this, we can\'t do something to stop it.
I think we just have to start with ourselves.
Let\'s not judge a person by his/her look.
See you tomorrow!~
~T. Jessie~
Hello there Jessie.>> Correct!Whew, it is quiet hard to get up on time on morning. haha>> Whew, it is quiet hard to get up on time in the morning. haha
I\'m surprised when time isn\'t what I expected.
>> Correct!
I hope we can talk each other longer in this time.
>> I hope we can talk to each other longer this time.
OR>> I hope we can talk to each other longer tomorrow.See you soon :D>> Correct!<Esaay>
>> EssayI can\'t say beauty is irrelevant with one\'s success actually.
>> I can\'t say that beauty is irrelevant with one\'s success actually.
Many people discriminate with beauty though even they do not know anything about a person they\'re seeing.
>> Many people discriminate based on beauty even though they do not know anything about the person they\'re seeing.
It\'s quiet unfair but there\'s nothing we can do for this actually I guess.
>> It\'s quiet unfair but I guess there\'s nothing we can do about this.
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