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2014-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello there Jessie. Whew, it is quiet hard to get up on time on morning. haha I'm surprised when time isn't what I expected. I hope we can talk each other longer in this time. See you soon :D <Esaay> I can't say beauty is irrelevant with one's success actually. Many people discriminate with beauty though even they do not know anything about a person they're seeing. It's quiet unfair but there's nothing we can do for this actually I guess.

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Good morning! I understand why you are having difficulty cause I feel the same way.hahha I totally agree with your opinion, this is what is happening in our society. Even if we know it shouldn\'t be like this, we can\'t do something to stop it. I think we just have to start with ourselves. Let\'s not judge a person by his/her look. See you tomorrow!~ ~T. Jessie~ Hello there Jessie.>> Correct!Whew, it is quiet hard to get up on time on morning. haha>> Whew, it is quiet hard to get up on time in the morning. haha I\'m surprised when time isn\'t what I expected. >> Correct! I hope we can talk each other longer in this time. >> I hope we can talk to each other longer this time. OR>>  I hope we can talk to each other longer tomorrow.See you soon :D>> Correct!<Esaay> >> EssayI can\'t say beauty is irrelevant with one\'s success actually. >> I can\'t say that beauty is irrelevant with one\'s success actually. Many people discriminate with beauty though even they do not know anything about a person they\'re seeing. >> Many people discriminate based on beauty  even though they do not know anything about the person they\'re seeing.  It\'s quiet unfair but there\'s nothing we can do for this actually I guess. >> It\'s quiet unfair but I guess there\'s nothing we can do about this.

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