Homework!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^.^
Happy Wednesday! ^^
In my case, I prefer to spend my entire life in one place.
It is very convenient.
In addition, I can also save a lot of money.
However, it is really costly to buy a house that you can consider yours.
Even though that\'s the case, I am still trying my best to earn and save money to buy a good house for my family, specially for my parents.
By the way, let\'s talk about your composition now.
You presented your answer very well.
Your ideas are well-delivered through your writing.
However, you just missed to check few errors.
They are proper usage of prepositions and con[이름]ctions.
One more thing, be careful of the spelling of the words you use.
That\'s all.
As a whole, you really did great in doing your homework! ^^
Keep on improving! ^^
Anyway, see you very soon! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
I\'d like to move my job and residence.
>> I\'d like to move to another job and residence.
I have been used to be tired of eveything.
>> I have been used to be tired of everything.
>> BETTER: I\'m fed up of being tired of everything.
I like to change to be refreshed.
>> CORRECT!
Also, to change job, house or community is a great way to make nice experiences.
>> In addition, to change job, house or community is a great way to make nice experiences.
>> OR: In addition, to change job, house or community is a great way to make some new and nice experiences.
Especially, to live some other place with doing favorite job is alway my dream since I was young.
>> Especially, to live in another place where I can do my favorite job is always my dream since I was young.
>> OR: Especially, to live in another place where I can do my favorite job is always my dream since I was young.
Someday, I will live that kind of life!
>> CORRECT!
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