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If you were to create a superhero, what would be its characteristics or qualities and how would it look like?
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I like Iron Man among movie characters, so I would create a superhero based on Iron Man.
It means I want to be a superhero, wearing such a nice strong suite.
When it comes to charateristics, I wish I would fly and shoot laser and missles.
If emergency happens, I'll act without anyone knowing like Superman.
But I'll do that only in Korea because it's no doubt that I'll be so busy...:-)
강사 첨삭
HAPPY WEDNESDAY Mr. [이름] :))
I will do my best to check your homework.
I know you\'ve been really working hard so I\'m proud of you that you can balance everything.
But also, please do take good care of your health.
Keep safe and talk to you later!! :))
====>> Teacher Myra
P.S Even your homework made me laugh out loud Mr. [이름], kkkk :D
If you\'ll be a superhero, please please come in Philippines too. Share your awesomeness!! :D
If you were to create a superhero, what would be its characteristics or qualities and how would it look like?
I like Iron Man among movie characters, so I would create a superhero based on Iron Man.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> I like Iron Man amongf all movie characters...
It means I want to be a superhero, wearing such a nice strong suite.
>>CORRECT
When it comes to charateristics, I wish I would fly and shoot laser and missles.
>>When it comes to characteristics, I wish I would fly, and shoot laser and missiles. (please check your spelling^^)
If emergency happens, I\'ll act without anyone knowing like Superman.
>>CORRECT
But I\'ll do that only in Korea because it\'s no doubt that I\'ll be so busy...:-)
>>CORRECT
I will do my best to check your homework.
I know you\'ve been really working hard so I\'m proud of you that you can balance everything.
But also, please do take good care of your health.
Keep safe and talk to you later!! :))
====>> Teacher Myra
P.S Even your homework made me laugh out loud Mr. [이름], kkkk :D
If you\'ll be a superhero, please please come in Philippines too. Share your awesomeness!! :D
If you were to create a superhero, what would be its characteristics or qualities and how would it look like?
I like Iron Man among movie characters, so I would create a superhero based on Iron Man.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> I like Iron Man amongf all movie characters...
It means I want to be a superhero, wearing such a nice strong suite.
>>CORRECT
When it comes to charateristics, I wish I would fly and shoot laser and missles.
>>When it comes to characteristics, I wish I would fly, and shoot laser and missiles. (please check your spelling^^)
If emergency happens, I\'ll act without anyone knowing like Superman.
>>CORRECT
But I\'ll do that only in Korea because it\'s no doubt that I\'ll be so busy...:-)
>>CORRECT
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