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2014-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi there, Jessie. :) What will we talk about in the next class? It's quiet hard to choose one topic for the next class, maybe as you can feel... haha Then see you tommrow. :D <Essay> How did you know that the part which I'm learning in the main English class now is about aliens or something unknown that make us scared. Anyway, my side is positive. The space is really huge, so even we can't estimate how much big it is. And I'm quiet sure that aliens or other speicies exist somewhere. The space era is coming closer as long as the time passes by.

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Hello there [이름]! Thanks for taking some time to write me. Anyway, maybe we can talk about the supernatural world since we started talking about it already. Ohh, so  are you talking about aliens in your class?hahaha I\'m a genius, right?hahaha ^^ Just kidding! It\'s just a coincidence. Well, as you rest this weekend, try to think of the supernatural stories that you know so you can tell me about it on Monday. See you! ~T. Jessie~ Hi there, Jessie. :)>> Correct!What will we talk about in the next class? >> Correct! It\'s quiet hard to choose one topic for the next class, maybe as you can feel... haha>> As you can feel, it is quite hard to choose one topic for the next class.Then see you tommrow. :D>> Correct!<Essay>How did you know that the part which I\'m learning in the main English class now is about aliens or something unknown that make us scared. >> How did you know that I\'m learning about aliens or something unknown that make us scared in my English class? Anyway, my side is positive. >> Correct! The space is really huge, so even we can\'t estimate how much big it is. >> The space is really huge, so we can\'t even estimate how big it is. And I\'m quiet sure that aliens or other speicies exist somewhere. >> And I\'m quite sure that aliens or other species exist somewhere. The space era is coming closer as long as the time passes by. >> The space era is coming closer as long as time passes by.

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