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2014-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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I never give away my goods quality. of course my goods never maintain perfect quality always. but I efforts always, and i never compromise. I focus on just quality. low quality goods can much sell, but it never can maintain. l think that good quality goods are going to maintain my business. because l love my job so much, i possible will never give away.

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Hello there, [이름] Never get tired trying to check the corrections, I am sending you because those could help you determine your strengths and weaknesses and areas to focus on. Take care!!! T. Jeny   I never give away my goods quality. >>I will never give the quality of my goods away. of course my goods never maintain perfect quality always. >>Of course, my possessions will never maintain it\'s quality.but I efforts always, and i never compromise. >>But, I do my best to never compromise.I focus on just quality. >>I just focis on the quality.low quality goods can much sell, but it never can maintain. >>Low quality goods can be sold a lot but the quality can\'t be maintained.l think that good quality goods are going to maintain my business. >>I think, producing good quality products can maintain it\'s business.because l love my job so much, i possible will never give away. >>I love my job so much that is why I will never give it way.

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