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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi kris.
I thanks for your message but I couldn't understand part of your English message.
So I will study hard for my future.
Yesterday, I had a lot of mistake because I was very nervous.
Here are my homework.
I want to go to another countries.
When I visit another conutries, I want to speak English.
Also, I want to teach an English to my youngest daugher. (My youngest daughter is 6 years old.)
In the future, maybe I would be to visit a lot of countries with my family and I would be to speak English very well.
See you later. Have a good day.
I am looking forward to your class.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Happy Wednesday! ^^
Thank you so much for making your homework.
I really appreciate it. Anyway, let us learn English little by little, okay.
Don\'t worry, I will speak English very slowly. I\'m sorry about yesterday
because maybe my pacing was a little bit fast for you.
By the way, kindly study the following corrections below, okay.
Have a great day ahead and see you later. :)
~~Teacher Kris
Hi kris.I thanks for your message but I couldn\'t understand part of your English message.
>>Thank you for your message. Unfortunately, I couldn\'t understand part of your English message.So I will study hard for my future.
>> So, I will study hard for my future.Yesterday, I had a lot of mistake because I was very nervous.>> Correct
>> OR: I was nervous yesterday that\'s why I had a lot of mistakes.Here are my homework.
>> Here is my homeworkI want to go to another countries.
>> I want to go to other countries.
>> OR: I want to go overseas.
>>OR: I want to go abroad.When I visit another conutries, I want to speak English.
>> If I will visit other countries, I want to speak in English.
Also, I want to teach an English to my youngest daugher. (My youngest daughter is 6 years old.)
>>Also, I want to teach English to my youngest daughter who is 6 years old.
In the future, maybe I would be to visit a lot of countries with my family and I would be to speak English very well.>> In the future, maybe my family and I would visit other countries. And, I would be a good English speaker by then.See you later. Have a good day.
>> CorrectI am looking forward to your class.
>> Correct
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