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2014-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Hi kris. I thanks for your message but I couldn't understand part of your English message. So I will study hard for my future. Yesterday, I had a lot of mistake because I was very nervous. Here are my homework. I want to go to another countries. When I visit another conutries, I want to speak English. Also, I want to teach an English to my youngest daugher. (My youngest daughter is 6 years old.) In the future, maybe I would be to visit a lot of countries with my family and I would be to speak English very well. See you later. Have a good day. I am looking forward to your class.

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Hi [이름]! ^^   Happy Wednesday! ^^   Thank you so much for making your homework. I really appreciate it. Anyway, let us learn English little by little, okay. Don\'t worry, I will speak English very slowly. I\'m sorry about yesterday because maybe my pacing was a little bit fast for you. By the way, kindly study the following corrections below, okay. Have a great day ahead and see you later. :)   ~~Teacher Kris   Hi kris.I thanks for your message but I couldn\'t understand part of your English message. >>Thank you for your message. Unfortunately, I couldn\'t understand part of your English message.So I will study hard for my future. >> So, I will study hard for my future.Yesterday, I had a lot of mistake because I was very nervous.>> Correct >> OR: I was nervous yesterday that\'s why I had a lot of mistakes.Here are my homework. >> Here is my homeworkI want to go to another countries. >> I want to go to other countries. >> OR: I want to go overseas. >>OR: I want to go abroad.When I visit another conutries, I want to speak English. >> If I will visit other countries, I want to  speak in English. Also, I want to teach an English to my youngest daugher. (My youngest daughter is 6 years old.) >>Also, I want to teach English to my youngest daughter who is 6 years old. In the future, maybe I would be to visit a lot of countries with my family and I would be to speak English very well.>> In the future, maybe my family and I would visit other countries. And, I would be a good English speaker by then.See you later. Have a good day. >> CorrectI am looking forward to your class. >> Correct  

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