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2014-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

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1. Pole positio A:I heared you are in pole position.I'm sure that you don't your best isn't it? B:No I'm not. I belived I'll do my best more than before. 2. Put on a brave face A: i'm sorry to hear that our company will fire you. B: Yes. so,I can't tell this news to my family. A: You must put on a brave face and discuss this problem with your family. B: Thanks Today,I'll consult to family 3. Take a back seat (meaning:you are subordinate) A:why don't you play game with me? B:what kinds of game do you want to play? C:How about playing the rock,paper and scissors. A:That's great it will be fun. C:I recommend to us if someone loses the game, then the loser do taking a seat. what about this rule? A,B: it sounds like intersting

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]! Take you for taking time to accomplish your homework. I\'m amazed because you were able to make dialogues out of it. That was remarkable! Although it\'s long overdue (hmm) because this was your homework last week, still I appreciate your efforts. Please just go over my corrections. Teacher Lexi Here are my corrections: 1. Pole positionA:I heared you are in pole position.I\'m sure that you don\'t your best isn\'t it? >>I heard that you are in a pole position. I\'m sure you did your best, isn\'t it?B:No I\'m not. I belived I\'ll do my best more than before. >>No, I didn\'t. I\'ll try to do my best more than before.2. Put on a brave face A: i\'m sorry to hear that our company will fire you. >>Correct (Capitalization ~ I\'m)B: Yes. so,I can\'t tell this news to my family. >>Correct (Punctuation ~ Yes, so I ...)A: You must put on a brave face and discuss this problem with your family. >>Correct :)B: Thanks Today,I\'ll consult to family >>Thanks. I\'ll consult this to my family. OR: Thanks. I\'ll talk this over with my family.3. Take a back seat (meaning:you are subordinate) A:why don\'t you play game with me? >>Why don\'t you play a game with me?B:what kinds of game do you want to play? >>What kind of games do you want to play?C:How about playing the rock,paper and scissors. >>CorrectA:That\'s great it will be fun. >>Correct (Punctuation~ That\'s great! It will be fun.C:I recommend to us if someone loses the game, then the loser do taking a seat. what about this rule? >>I recommend that if someone loses the game, then he will take a seat. How about that?A,B: it sounds like intersting >>Correct (Capitalization~ It, spelling check~ interesting)

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