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2014-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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b d a c d d a b c b the greatest place I have been is Hapcheon. It was very beautiful that I surprised. There are Tripitaka Koreana. It was designated as a UNESCO World heritage site.

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Good evening TOM! Thank you very much for always participating in class. You are really fun to talk to. It\'s good that you always try to compose meaningful and long sentences. Yet, be careful with your word order. Add more words to your vocbulary bank. ^ I know you can do it. Of course, I will be here to guide you. Take Care! I hope to visit the place you mentioned below someday. Have fun this weekend. Teacher Nina   b >> Correctd >> Correcta >> Correctc >> Correctd >> ed >> Correcta >> Correctb >> Correctc >> Correctb >> Correctthe greatest place I have been is Hapcheon. >> The greatest place that I have been to is Hapcheon. It was very beautiful that I surprised. >> It was very beautiful that made me surprised. >> OR: It was very beautiful and I was surprised. There are Tripitaka Koreana. >> CorrectIt was designated as a UNESCO World heritage site. >> Correct

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