homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I perfor the homemade food, Which my mom made it.
Because it is not spend the money, and I can eat only What I like the tasty flavor!
But my mom didn't like it.
Because my mom didn't like the cook and She must sepnd her time.☞she thinks cook is borther you
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! ^^
Good job with your homework! ^^ Your homework was well thought out but we still need to work on your grammar. ^^ I agree with you that homemade tastes great! ^^
Study well this weekend. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I perfor the homemade food, Which my mom made it.
>> I prefer homemade food that my mom makes.Because it is not spend the money, and I can eat only What I like the tasty flavor!
>> Since it doesn\'t cost much and I can only eat the tasty flavors that I really like.But my mom didn\'t like it.Because my mom didn\'t like the cook and She must sepnd her time.☞she thinks cook is borther you
>> But my mom doesn\'t like it because my mom doesn\'t like cooking since it takes a lot of her time and she thinks cooking is a bother.
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