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Hello, teacher Nina! Long time no see :( right?
We had a class on Wednesday and it's Saturday today.
On Thursday, I forgot to bring my cell phone so I had to cancel a class.
I'm really sorry about that.
This topic is "What kinds of people do you think are more prone to developing a gambling problem?"
Well, I think this is most difficult topic more than ever.
As I said before, I have a lot of people who like gambles around me.
As a result that I think them, maybe, people who don't think gambles are harm are prone to developing a gambling problem.
They don't avoid gambles and control themselves.
Of course, I don't mean that all of people who don't think gambles are harm have a gambling problem.
I mean they are prone to do.
I wonder your thinking about it.
Have a nice rest of weekend :)
See you on Monday! I'm waiting for Monday.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for sending this in.
I really love when you share your ideas in writing.
I do understand, no worries. I am excited to talk to you. Hihihihi.
I hope that you are having a great weekend.
You did a good job in sharing your thoughts, yet, be careful with the words you use.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask it in class.
Teacher Nina
Hello, teacher Nina!
>> CORRECT!
Long time no see :( right?
>> CORRECT!We had a class on Wednesday and it\'s Saturday today.
>> We had a class last Wednesday and it\'s Saturday today.On Thursday, I forgot to bring my cell phone so I had to cancel a class.
>> Last Thursday, I forgot to bring my cellphone so I had to cancel the class.
>> OR: Last Thursday, I forgot to bring my cellular phone so I had to put off the class. I\'m really sorry about that.>> CORRECT!This topic is \"What kinds of people do you think are more prone to developing a gambling problem?\"
>> The topic is \"What kinds of people do you think are more prone to developing a gambling problem?\"
Well, I think this is most difficult topic more than ever.
>> Well, I think this is the most difficult topic than before.
>> OR: Well, I think this is the most difficult topic than the previous homework you gave me. As I said before, I have a lot of people who like gambles around me.
>> As I said before, I have a lot of people around me like gambling.
>> OR: As I mentioned before, there are a lot of people who likes to gamble. As a result that I think them, maybe, people who don\'t think gambles are harm are prone to developing a gambling problem.
>> Did you mean: As a result, maybe I think people who don\'t like to gamble are prone to develop a gambling problem in the future.>> OR: As a result, maybe people who don\'t gamble are more prone to addiction someday. They don\'t avoid gambles and control themselves.
>> Did you mean: They can\'t control themselves ad avoid it. Of course, I don\'t mean that all of people who don\'t think gambles are harm have a gambling problem.
>> Did you mean: Of course, I don\'t mean that all people who don\'t think about gambling might have a problem in the future. I mean they are prone to do.
>> I mean they are prone to do it. I wonder your thinking about it.
>> I wonder if you are thinking about it. Have a nice rest of weekend :)
>> Have a nice weekend.
>> OR: Enjoy the rest of the weekend. See you on Monday!
>> CORRECT!I\'m waiting for Monday.
>> CORRECT!
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