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2014-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello, again! I'm sorry that I do homeworks at once. I really try to do once a day but it doesn't work. I saw the topic you gave me. It's about the people with food allergies. I thought that you remembered that I have a sea food allergy. Thank you for remembering the details. Well, I think it depends on whether the person with a food allergy like the food or not. As already you know, I have a sea food allergy. There are so many sea foods and I like some and I don't like others. Not to eat something that I don't like is easy and I don't think I am deprived. But not to eat something that I like like shrimps especially grilled is difficult. Actually I don't think I'm deprived even I like the food because if I think I'm deprived, It's harder not to eat the food. I think other foods that have better taste and I can eat :) If I have not to eat the food anyway, It doesn't need to think I'm deprived myself. To think I'm deprived myself makes me deprived, I think.

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Good evening [이름]!Are you have a wonderful weekend? What did you do? I am so excited to hear your activities. ^^ Of course, I will always remember the important things you tell me. Your attitude is fantastic! I am really happy that you are a positive thinker. I know that you will be successful in the future. ^_^ Talk to you soon.Teacher Nina   Hello, again! >> CorrectI\'m sorry that I do homeworks at once. >> I\'m sorry that I did all of my homework at the same time.I really try to do once a day but it doesn\'t work. >> I really try to do it everyday but it doesn\'t work. I saw the topic you gave me. >> CorrectIt\'s about the people with food allergies. >> CorrectI thought that you remembered that I have a sea food allergy. >> I think you remembered that I have a seafood allergy. Thank you for remembering the details. >> CorrectWell, I think it depends on whether the person with a food allergy like the food or not. >> Well, I think it depends on whether the person with a food allergy likes the food or not. >> OR: Well, I think it depends on whether the person with an allergy likes the food or not.As already you know, I have a sea food allergy. >> Correct There are so many sea foods and I like some and I don\'t like others. >> There are a lot of kinds of seafood, I like some and I don\'t like the others. >> OR: There are so many kinds of seaffod, I like some of them and I don\'t the rest. Not to eat something that I don\'t like is easy and I don\'t think I am deprived. >> CorrectBut not to eat something that I like like shrimps especially grilled is difficult. >> But not to eat something that I like such as shrimps especially grilled is difficult. >> OR: But not to eat something that I like such as grilled shrimps is difficult for me.Actually I don\'t think I\'m deprived even I like the food because if I think I\'m deprived, It\'s harder not to eat the food. >> Actually, I don\'t think I\'m deprived even Iif I like the food because if I will think that I am, It\'s harder for me not to eat the food.I think other foods that have better taste and I can eat :) >> I think other foods that have a better taste, I can eat it. If I have not to eat the food anyway, It doesn\'t need to think I\'m deprived myself. >> If I can\'t eat the food anyway, I don\'t have to think that I am depriving myself. To think I\'m deprived myself makes me deprived, I think. >> Thinking about it makes me deprived.

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