Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, again!
I'm sorry that I do homeworks at once.
I really try to do once a day but it doesn't work.
I saw the topic you gave me.
It's about the people with food allergies.
I thought that you remembered that I have a sea food allergy.
Thank you for remembering the details.
Well, I think it depends on whether the person with a food allergy like the food or not.
As already you know, I have a sea food allergy.
There are so many sea foods and I like some and I don't like others.
Not to eat something that I don't like is easy and I don't think I am deprived.
But not to eat something that I like like shrimps especially grilled is difficult.
Actually I don't think I'm deprived even I like the food because if I think I'm deprived, It's harder not to eat the food.
I think other foods that have better taste and I can eat :)
If I have not to eat the food anyway, It doesn't need to think I'm deprived myself.
To think I'm deprived myself makes me deprived, I think.
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!Are you have a wonderful weekend?
What did you do? I am so excited to hear your activities. ^^
Of course, I will always remember the important things you tell me.
Your attitude is fantastic! I am really happy that you are a positive thinker.
I know that you will be successful in the future. ^_^
Talk to you soon.Teacher Nina
Hello, again!
>> CorrectI\'m sorry that I do homeworks at once.
>> I\'m sorry that I did all of my homework at the same time.I really try to do once a day but it doesn\'t work.
>> I really try to do it everyday but it doesn\'t work. I saw the topic you gave me.
>> CorrectIt\'s about the people with food allergies.
>> CorrectI thought that you remembered that I have a sea food allergy.
>> I think you remembered that I have a seafood allergy. Thank you for remembering the details.
>> CorrectWell, I think it depends on whether the person with a food allergy like the food or not.
>> Well, I think it depends on whether the person with a food allergy likes the food or not.
>> OR: Well, I think it depends on whether the person with an allergy likes the food or not.As already you know, I have a sea food allergy.
>> Correct There are so many sea foods and I like some and I don\'t like others.
>> There are a lot of kinds of seafood, I like some and I don\'t like the others.
>> OR: There are so many kinds of seaffod, I like some of them and I don\'t the rest. Not to eat something that I don\'t like is easy and I don\'t think I am deprived.
>> CorrectBut not to eat something that I like like shrimps especially grilled is difficult.
>> But not to eat something that I like such as shrimps especially grilled is difficult.
>> OR: But not to eat something that I like such as grilled shrimps is difficult for me.Actually I don\'t think I\'m deprived even I like the food because if I think I\'m deprived, It\'s harder not to eat the food.
>> Actually, I don\'t think I\'m deprived even Iif I like the food because if I will think that I am, It\'s harder for me not to eat the food.I think other foods that have better taste and I can eat :)
>> I think other foods that have a better taste, I can eat it. If I have not to eat the food anyway, It doesn\'t need to think I\'m deprived myself.
>> If I can\'t eat the food anyway, I don\'t have to think that I am depriving myself. To think I\'m deprived myself makes me deprived, I think.
>> Thinking about it makes me deprived.
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