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2014-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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'fashion' meaning is everyone has a different view. but fashion influence everyone. because we wear on thing that of selected liking. liking is that educated thing sum. if we don't has any liking. we have a low standard of educating. ' seeing and hearing and feeling ' will be taste. fashion is liking

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Hello [이름] I comment you for answering our homework. You really did a great job!!! It is important to make an effort to step forward in learning new things so that we can apply it our daily life. T. Jeny   \'fashion\' meaning is everyone has a different view. >>We all have different views about fashion.but fashion influence everyone. >>But fashion can influence everybody.because we wear on thing that of selected liking. >>Because we wear clothes depending on what we like.liking is that educated thing sum. >>Our taste depends on what we know about fashion.if we don\'t has any liking. we have a low standard of educating.>>If we are not interested with fashion, we have a low standard about fashion.\' seeing and hearing and feeling \' will be taste. >>Seeing, hearing and feeling about fashion can identify our taste.fashion is liking >>Fashion is passion.

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