Homework 5.10
학생이 쓴 원문
What\'s more important to you when you travel - comfort and relaxation, or stimulating new experiences?
: Stimulating new experiences is more important for me. Because traveling is precious c[이름]ce to feel special feelings. So I want to experience many things and feel something new.
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
Stimulating new experiences is more important for me.
>> Stimulating new experiences is more important for me.
Because traveling is precious c[이름]ce to feel special feelings.
>> Because traveling is a precious c[이름]ce to feel special feelings.
So I want to experience many things and feel something new.
>> CORRECT!
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