Homework 5.10.MON
학생이 쓴 원문
What\'s your first thought when you woke up this morning?
First thing I thought this morning was \" I don\'t want to get up from my sweet bed.\" \" Why should I go to school? \".
These were the first words that come to my mind first.
I slept late yesterday. I slept at 2:00 am. So I was too sleepy to get up and prepare for school.
Also, it was very cold outside this morning. I was shivering like a little lamb that has no fur.
One more reason that I didn\'t want to go to school was that I have 2 math classes on my class timetable.
The worst thing in math class was I will learn a new unit.
But not like my imagination, the math class went pretty well.
And my bed is pretty big for one person, and it\'s so cozy.
Especially the cold days, I never want to come out of my bed.
Today morning was rainy too, so I wanted to stay in a cozy place.
However almost all daily mornings, I don\'t want to go to school.
But I think I will wake up with a positive mind if I sleep early and sleep deeply.
강사 첨삭
Hello Claire!
This was very well-written! Great job. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed reading this. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
First thing I thought this morning was \" I don\'t want to get up from my sweet bed.\" \" Why should I go to school? \".
>>CORRECT!
These were the first words that come to my mind first.
These were the first words that come to my mind first.
>>CORRECT!
I slept late yesterday. I slept at 2:00 am. So I was too sleepy to get up and prepare for school.
I slept late yesterday. I slept at 2:00 am. So I was too sleepy to get up and prepare for school.
>>CORRECT!
Also, it was very cold outside this morning. I was shivering like a little lamb that has no fur.
Also, it was very cold outside this morning. I was shivering like a little lamb that has no fur.
>>CORRECT!
One more reason that I didn\'t want to go to school was that I have 2 math classes on my class timetable.
One more reason that I didn\'t want to go to school was that I have 2 math classes on my class timetable.
>>One more reason that I didn\'t want to go to school was that I had 2 math classes on my class timetable.
The worst thing in math class was I will learn a new unit.
The worst thing in math class was I will learn a new unit.
>>The worst thing in math class was I had to learn a new unit.
But not like my imagination, the math class went pretty well.
But not like my imagination, the math class went pretty well.
>>CORRECT!
And my bed is pretty big for one person, and it\'s so cozy.
And my bed is pretty big for one person, and it\'s so cozy.
>>CORRECT!
Especially the cold days, I never want to come out of my bed.
Especially the cold days, I never want to come out of my bed.
>>Especially on cold days, I never want to get out of my bed.
Today morning was rainy too, so I wanted to stay in a cozy place.
Today morning was rainy too, so I wanted to stay in a cozy place.
>>This morning, it was rainy too, so I wanted to stay in a cozy place.
However almost all daily mornings, I don\'t want to go to school.
However almost all daily mornings, I don\'t want to go to school.
>>However, in most mornings, I don\'t want to go to school.
But I think I will wake up with a positive mind if I sleep early and sleep deeply.
But I think I will wake up with a positive mind if I sleep early and sleep deeply.
>>CORRECT!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.