HOMEWORK~!! 5-(
학생이 쓴 원문
I have any question~!
What is the abbreviation for \'s\' in \'Friend\'s House\'?
\'Friend\'s house\' is just an example.
1.
I think robotic arm is very more elaborate than human arm.
Nowadays, when doctors operate in the hospital, they use robotic arm a lot.
The robotic arm doesn\'t have a shivering and it has few mistakes.
Therefore, the robotic arm is steady.
If I use robotic arm, I would use to assemble for furniture or computer.
2.
When I worked in my store, it\'s hard to find bar-code location for products
Because it is different all bar-code location for the products by companies.
Therefore, I want to set up the company which is making all bar-code location for the product equal.
But this is a difficult way.
Because each companies have their own each other bar-code location for products from long times.
However, I think it can make improvements by the inconvenience of the self-employed.
강사 첨삭
Hi An!
Yes, Friend\'s house is correct! It shows ownership. :) So when you say friend\'s house, meaning to say it\'s the house of your friend. :)
~Lucy
>>I think robotic arm is more elaborated than human arm.
Nowadays, when doctors operate in the hospital, they use robotic arm a lot.
>>CORRECT!
The robotic arm doesn\'t have a shivering and it has few mistakes.
The robotic arm doesn\'t have a shivering and it has few mistakes.
>>The robotic arm doesn\'t shiver and it has few mistakes.
Therefore, the robotic arm is steady.
>>CORRECT!
If I use robotic arm, I would use to assemble for furniture or computer.
If I use robotic arm, I would use to assemble for furniture or computer.
>>CORRECT!
When I worked in my store, it\'s hard to find bar-code location for products
When I worked in my store, it\'s hard to find bar-code location for products
>>CORRECT!
Because it is different all bar-code location for the products by companies.
Because it is different all bar-code location for the products by companies.
>>Because all bar-code has different locations from the products of each companies.
Therefore, I want to set up the company which is making all bar-code location for the product equal.
>>Therefore, I want to set up the company which is making all bar-code location for the product equally.
But this is a difficult way.
>>CORRECT!
Because each companies have their own each other bar-code location for products from long times.
Because each companies have their own each other bar-code location for products from long times.
>>Because each companies have their own bar-code locations for products for a long time.
However, I think it can make improvements by the inconvenience of the self-employed.
>>However, I think it can make improvements from the inconvenience of the self-employed.
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