Homework 5.14

2021-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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Are there jobs that are only for women or only for men? What are they? : People have different characteristic. But It is not difference between women and men but individual. So I think job that have to work in a public bathhouse is only job that people can\'t do because of their gender.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Michelle! ^^
T[이름]k you so much for doing your homework.
Enjoy your weekend! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


People have different characteristic. 
>> People have different characteristics. 

But It is not difference between women and men but individual. 
>> But It is not the difference between women and men but in individuality. 

So I think job that have to work in a public bathhouse is only job that people can\'t do because of their gender.
>> So, I think work such as in a public bathhouse is the only job that people can\'t do because of their gender.

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