homework(5/17) : connecting word

2016-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

Sam. I am also glad to hear your voice. This week is vary important in our project and is final peak time. Maybe i will be able to have a sufficient time to learn English and to do my homework next week or so. it depends on the results of monitoring this week. Homework today was difficult and confused. haha = body = 1. Because Rahul was ill, he could not attend the conference. 2. If You should not pay the fee immediately, you will be expelled from the class. 3. If there is no demand for these books,we don’t stock them in our store. 4. Because He was always late for work, he was sacked. 5. I am tired because I have been working all day. 6. The enemy captured the city and they destroyed several monuments and bridges. 7. She bought us dinner and she also drove us back home. 8. He is an arrogant guy but i can’t help liking him. 9. He smokes and he also drinks.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh, Continue that passion because it can help you be successful. Nice job on our homework. I want you to review the corrections that I have made. I guess we have to study more on grammar so that it can help you remember the rules that we need to follow in making a sentence. Have a great day!!! T. Jeny   Sam. >>correctI am also glad to hear your voice. >>correctThis week is vary important in our project and is final peak time. >>It is very important and peak time for our project this week.Maybe i will be able to have a sufficient time to learn English and to do my homework next week or so. it depends on the results of monitoring this week. >>Maybe I will be able to have a sufficient time to learn English and to do my homework next week. It depends on the results of our monitoring this week.Homework today was difficult and confused. haha>>correct= body = 1. Because Rahul was ill, he could not attend the conference. >>Rahul was ill so he could not attend the conference.2. If You should not pay the fee immediately, you will be expelled from the class. >>You should pay the fee immediately; otherwise, you will be expelled from the class.3. If there is no demand for these books,we don’t stock them in our store. >>There is no demand for these books; therefore we don’t stock them in our store.4. Because He was always late for work, he was sacked. >>He was always late for work; therefore he was sacked.5. I am tired because I have been working all day. >>I am tired for I have been working all day.6. The enemy captured the city and they destroyed several monuments and bridges. >>The enemy captured the city and destroyed several monuments and bridges.7. She bought us dinner and she also drove us back home. >>She bought us dinner and drove us back home.8. He is an arrogant guy but i can’t help liking him. >>correct9. He smokes and he also drinks. >>He not only smokes but also drinks.

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