homework(5/18) : positive point of a stress

Hello Oh,

Sam.

>>correct
It is early summer weather now.

>>It is an early summer these days.
I heard from the news today that it will be about 31 degree temperature at peak time.

>>I heard from the news today that it will be about 31 degrees Celsius at peak time.
In addition, Thanks for your correction about connecting word, it is very useful to me because i did not know well and was confused.
>>In addition, thanks for your corrections about connecting words, it was very useful for me because I did not know about it that well and I was confused.
== BODY ==
A stress is very hamful in both physically and psychologically.

>>Stress is very harmful in both physically and psychologically.
But if we distinguish a stress well, we can effectively reduce the stress.

>>But if we can distinguish stress well, we can effectively reduce the stress.

As the first step, we have to distinguish the stress using our full wisdom whether solvable or not.
>>As a first step, we have to distinguish the stress using our full wisdom whether if it is solvable or not.
In case of solvable stress, we will actively take care of it in every way and fix.

>>In case of solvable stress, we will actively take care of it in every way and try to fix it.

If not, we have to accept and accommodate.
>>correct
As part of relieving stress, I mainly play guitar, sing a my favrite songs, sometimes listen to music and stop what i am doing and I often sleep right.

>>As part of relieving stress, I mainly play the guitar, sing my favorite songs, sometimes listen to music and stop what I am doing and I often sleep right.
But, The best is that i don\'t get stressed as possible because stress is not good to myself.

>>But, the best thing is that I don\'t get stressed as possible because stress is not good for myself.