Homework 5.24
학생이 쓴 원문
Agatha Christie said: \"Nearly all children go to school nowadays and have things arranged for them [so] they seem...unable to produce their own ideas.\" Do you agree with her?
: I don\'t agree with her. She said children can\'t develop creativity. Because school prepare all things. But I think there are many things to produce student\'s own ideas. For example, If we learn about \'citizen participation\' in politics class, we can search for \'political apathy\' alone. What I want to say is, It depends on student\'s passion for studying and curiosity.
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I don\'t agree with her.
>> CORRECT!
She said children can\'t develop creativity.
>> CORRECT!
Because school prepare all things.
>> Because school prepares all things.
But I think there are many things to produce student\'s own ideas.
>> But I think there are many things to produce a student\'s own ideas.
For example, If we learn about \'citizen participation\' in politics class, we can search for \'political apathy\' alone.
>> For example, If we learn about \"citizen participation\" in the politics class, we can search for \'political apathy\' alone.
What I want to say is, It depends on student\'s passion for studying and curiosity.
>> What I want to say is, it depends on the student\'s passion for studying and curiosity.
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