homework(5/24): What makes your parents special ?

2016-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear sam. Sorry for late homework. I didn't understand well the title of today, "What makes your parents special ?". In particular, I didn't understand the meaning of the word,"make". My parents are special for me. As you know, my parents died, he diee at my 5 ages and she died at my 35 ages, respectively. He was honorable as a elementary teacher and She sacrificed and dedicate to our brothers as widow during her lifetime. It is sufficient for me to feel them special. I have my grown-up son and daughter, even now I also miss my parents from time to time. when i see the word, "parents", Today especially I especially want to see my dad and mom. I feel blue now. ㅠ-ㅠ(tears). Anyway, sam, see you brightly tomorrow. Thanks and regards,bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello OH!!!

I am sorry to know that the question for today\'s homework made you feel sad.

I also do miss my parents...they mean a lot to me. Even if I wasn\'t able to spend a long time with them.

\"What makes your parents special ?\" it means why they are special for you or what characteristics do they have that makes them special.

Take care always...Have a great day!!!!

Take care!!!

T. Jeny

 

Dear sam.

>>correct
Sorry for late homework.

>>Sorry for the late homework.
I didn\'t understand well the title of today, \"What makes your parents special ?\".

>>I didn\'t understand well the title of today\'s homework, \"What makes your parents special ?\".
In particular, I didn\'t understand the meaning of the word,\"make\".

>>correct
My parents are special for me.

>>correct
As you know, my parents died, he diee at my 5 ages and she died at my 35 ages, respectively.

>>As you know, my parents died, my father died when I was 5 and my mother died when I was 35, respectively.
He was honorable as a elementary teacher and She sacrificed and dedicate to our brothers as widow during her lifetime.
>>My father was an honorable elementary teacher and my mother sacrificed and dedicated her life to my brothers as a widow during her lifetime.

It is sufficient for me to feel them special.
>>It is sufficient for me to make them feel that they are special.
I have my grown-up son and daughter, even now I also miss my parents from time to time.
>>I have my grown-up son and daughter, even now I still miss my parents from time to time.
when i see the word, \"parents\", Today especially I especially want to see my dad and mom.

>>When I saw the word, \"parents,\" I immediately wanted to see my parents.
I feel blue now. ㅠ-ㅠ(tears).

>>correct
Anyway, sam, see you brightly tomorrow.

>>correct
Thanks and regards,bye.

>>correct




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