Homework 5.27
학생이 쓴 원문
What should be the first step in c[이름]ging the educational system in your country? Explain.
: I think presentation activity is very important for students. Because students have to investigate and prepare their presentation and it will help them have more acknowledge. So, students have to given c[이름]ce to do presentation and search what they are interested in, talk about their opinion about topic to classmates.
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~ Teacher Tricia
I think presentation activity is very important for students.
>> CORRECT!
Because students have to investigate and prepare their presentation and it will help them have more acknowledge.
>> Because students have to investigate and prepare for their presentation, it will help their knowledge.
So, students have to given c[이름]ce to do presentation and search what they are interested in, talk about their opinion about topic to classmates.
>> So, students have to be given a c[이름]ce to do presentations and search what they are interested in and talk about their opinions about the topic to classmates.
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