homework(5/30) : Conjunctive adverbs
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T. Jeny
Dear sam.
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It is already an end of May. Time goes on very quickly.
>>It is already the end of May. Time flies very fast.
May is best month of year, but i had not a fun month because of being busy.
>>May is the best month of the year, but I didn\'t have fun because I was busy.
As your advice, i will not hesitate to utter the words that i want to say.
>>correct
To this, i need your sincere attention, correction. haha
>>correct
Thanks for your advice, carrot and stick.
>>correct
See you tomorrow.
>>correct
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Complete the following sentences.
1. The girl didn’t get the best medical care. As a result she died soon after.
>>correct
2. He has been warned before, Despite this, he should not have committed the same offense again.
>>He has been warned before. In this case, he should not have committed the same offense again.
3. She went on a strict diet, Despite this, she didn’t lose any weight.
>>correct
4. The principal wants to see you for the broken window.
>>correct
5. The matches were cancelled, as that it rained.
>>The matches were cancelled, owing to the fact that it rained.
6. The giraffe is an ungainly animal that it has such a long neck.
>>correct
7. Smoking is indeed dangerous. In addition, a lot of people get cancer because they smoke.
>>Smoking is indeed dangerous. For instance, a lot of people get cancer because they smoke.
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