homework(5/31) : gifts thai i want to receive from everyone in our family.
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Hello Oh,
Man often becomes what he believes himself to be. If I keep on saying to myself that I cannot do a certain thing, it is possible that I may end by really becoming incapable of doing it.
T. Jeny
Dear sam.
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There was a unexpected errors on system, so it took 4 hours to solve the problem, but now it was completely successful.
>>There was an unexpected error on the system, so it took 4 hours to solve the problem, but now it was completed successfully.Thank you for your compliment today.
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I will keep in mind that continueing to be talkative in our class help me to be successful in speaking the language well.
>>I will keep in mind that I need to be talkative in our class which will help me to be successful in speaking the language well.
Best Regards.
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I used to write at memo in my phone whenever a idea suddenly crossed my mind.
>>I used to write at memo on my phone whenever a sudden idea cross my mind.
They are a list of gifts that i want to receive someone at my birthday or wedding anniversary or a special day. haha
>>They are a list of gifts that I want to receive from someone on my birthday, wedding anniversary or on special days. haha
I have just opened my memo in the phone.
>>I have just opened my memo on the phone.
There are only two lists at that memo as follow: A collection of classical guitar repertory and touch pen for mobile phone.
>>There are two lists on my memo which are as follows: A collection of classical guitar repertory and a touch pen for my mobile phone.
Those are not expensive so much, nevertheless I want to receive from my children.
>>Those are not not that expensive, nevertheless I want to receive those from my children.
The lists are necessary for playing the guitar, for small keyboard size, respectively.
>>The lists are necessary for playing the guitar and for a small sized keyboard respectively.
It is simple, isn\'t it?
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But, The gifts that I want to receive from everyone in my family are their happiness and health above all things.
>>But, the gifts that I wanted to receive from everyone in my family are their happiness and good health above all things.
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