Homework 5

ESSAY: What considerations do you have when you buy a mobile phone? When I buy a mobile phone, I consider picture quality the most. I don't have my own camera so I just take a picture with my cellphone. So, picture quality is important for me. I also think picture qaulity affect quality or value of picture itself. However, cellphone has limits in picture quality, so I think it is better to buy a DSLR camera. Then, I'll consider the speed of mobile phone the most.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Mobile phones are now more of a necessity rather than a luxury. Just like you I consider the camera and the speed. We must choose what we buy so we won\'t regret it soon. Thanks for your ideas!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: When I buy a mobile phone, I consider picture quality the most. >> When I buy a mobile phone, I consider the picture quality the most. I don\'t have my own camera so I just take a picture with my cellphone. >> CORRECT OR> Since I don\'t have a camera I just use my phone instead. So, picture quality is important for me. >> CORRECT OR> I always consider the picture quality.I also think picture qaulity affect quality or value of picture itself. >> I also think picture qaulity affects the quality or the value of the picture itself. However, cellphone has limits in picture quality, so I think it is better to buy a DSLR camera. >> However, a cellphone has limits in picture quality, so I think it is better to buy a DSLR camera. Then, I\'ll consider the speed of mobile phone the most. >> CORRECT OR> I would also consider the speed when I buy a mobile phone.