Homework 5

2016-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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How can the press balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy Balancing between freedom and privacy is so difficult. Because it is different for the situation. So you estabilish some certain principle. First of all, you have to recognize that privacy respect accompany with responsibility of your behavior. If you can get away, there is no problem then. Second, look around your neighborhood. For example If your acting something like listen to rock music loudly in apartment, apartment resident express negative response for your rudely. but when you are in mountain or somewhere alone, you can do that without following consideration.

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Hi there my dear SUN, happy Monday!Thank you so much for sending in your homework today! You did very good!I hope you will keep up the good work. I do believe in what you can do and I hope you to always have faith in yourself my dear. You are a very good student... Take care always and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ How can the press balance freedom of expression with respect for privacy>>correctBalancing between freedom and privacy is so difficult. >>correct Because it is different for the situation. >>Because it depends on the situation. So you estabilish some certain principle. >>We have to establish some certain principles.First of all, you have to recognize that privacy respect accompany with responsibility of your behavior. >>First of all, you have to recognize that respect of privacy comes with behavioral responsibility. If you can get away, there is no problem then.>>correctSecond, look around your neighborhood. >>correct For example If your acting something like listen to rock music loudly in apartment, apartment resident express negative response for your rudely. >>For example, if you\'re listening to a loud music in your apartment, you have to consider your neighbors too. but when you are in mountain or somewhere alone, you can do that without following consideration. >>correct

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