Homework 5

2016-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

학생이 쓴 원문

TO: Teacher Sophia Hi Happy Sunday! Yesterday(before 50 minutes ago) I took a break at home. I woke up at 01:00 pm and ate a repast after washed my face. I watched a korean comedy show 'MUHAN DOJUN' which my favorite TV program. The story was casts and guestes had an engage intense mind game. Early of the game guestes team lead in a race, but finally casts team was won the game. I like Yang Se Hyung who cast of MUHANDOJUN as he had a good sense. He is so funny and very kindlily person I think. By the way did you saw a movie 'Miss. [Name]'s home~~~'? When I saw a 'Miss. [Name]'s home' I through Baron was so familiar for me. So I searched about him at home. And I found a BARON had appeared a 'KING'S MAN' His role was a 'Valentine' also bad man. Did you know about that? I was so surprised knew about that. HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: 1. still 2. always 3. already 4. yet 5. still 6. still 7. yet 8. always 9. still 10. yet

강사 첨삭

Hello SUNNY,

I didn\'t watched the movie yet.

I\'ll try to watch it this week.

I was busy watching an American series. kkk 

Anyway, let\'s talk about the movie in our class. ^^

Have a nice day ahead!

Teacher Sophia ^^

Here are your corrections:

Hi Happy Sunday!

>> Hi! Happy Sunday!
Yesterday(before 50 minutes ago) I took a break at home.

>> I took a break at home yesterday.
I woke up at 01:00 pm and ate a repast after washed my face.

>> I woke up at 1 P.M. and ate my breakfast after washing my face. 
I watched a korean comedy show \'MUHAN DOJUN\' which my favorite TV program.

>> I watched my favorite TV program which is a Korean comedy show - \"Muhan Dojun\".
The story was casts and guestes had an engage intense mind game.

>> The story is all about an intense mind game.
Early of the game guestes team lead in a race, but finally casts team was won the game.

>> The guests were leading in the race during the first part of the game but at the end of the game the casts of the show won the game. 
I like Yang Se Hyung who cast of MUHANDOJUN as he had a good sense.

>> I like Yan Se Hyung, who is one of the cast in \"Muhan Dojun\", because he is using his common sense.
He is so funny and very kindlily person I think.

>> I think, he is a funny and kind person.
By the way did you saw a movie \'Miss. [Name]\'s home~~~\'?

>> By the way, did you see the movie \"Miss. [Name]\'s home ?
When I saw a \'Miss. [Name]\'s home\' I through Baron was so familiar for me.

>> When I was watching the movie \"Miss. [Name]\'s home\", I was thinking that Baron looks familiar to me.
So I searched about him at home.

>> So, I made some research about him at home.
And I found a BARON had appeared a \'KING\'S MAN\'

>>  I found out that Baron appeared in the movie \"King\'s man\"
His role was a \'Valentine\' also bad man.

>> His role in the movie was \"Valentine\" which is a bad man too.
Did you know about that? I was so surprised knew about that.

>> Do you know about that? I was very surprised when I knew it.

Here are your answers:

1. still

>> CORRECT 
2. always

>>  CORRECT 
3. already

>>  CORRECT 
4. yet

>>  CORRECT 
5. still

>>  always
6. still

>>  CORRECT 
7. yet

>>  already
8. always

>>  CORRECT 
9. still

>>  CORRECT 
10. yet

>>  CORRECT 



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