Homework 5
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello SUNNY,
I didn\'t watched the movie yet.
I\'ll try to watch it this week.
I was busy watching an American series. kkk
Anyway, let\'s talk about the movie in our class. ^^
Have a nice day ahead!
Teacher Sophia ^^
Here are your corrections:
Hi Happy Sunday!
>> Hi! Happy Sunday!
Yesterday(before 50 minutes ago) I took a break at home.
>> I took a break at home yesterday.
I woke up at 01:00 pm and ate a repast after washed my face.
>> I woke up at 1 P.M. and ate my breakfast after washing my face.
I watched a korean comedy show \'MUHAN DOJUN\' which my favorite TV program.
>> I watched my favorite TV program which is a Korean comedy show - \"Muhan Dojun\".
The story was casts and guestes had an engage intense mind game.
>> The story is all about an intense mind game.
Early of the game guestes team lead in a race, but finally casts team was won the game.
>> The guests were leading in the race during the first part of the game but at the end of the game the casts of the show won the game.
I like Yang Se Hyung who cast of MUHANDOJUN as he had a good sense.
>> I like Yan Se Hyung, who is one of the cast in \"Muhan Dojun\", because he is using his common sense.
He is so funny and very kindlily person I think.
>> I think, he is a funny and kind person.
By the way did you saw a movie \'Miss. [Name]\'s home~~~\'?
>> By the way, did you see the movie \"Miss. [Name]\'s home ?
When I saw a \'Miss. [Name]\'s home\' I through Baron was so familiar for me.
>> When I was watching the movie \"Miss. [Name]\'s home\", I was thinking that Baron looks familiar to me.
So I searched about him at home.
>> So, I made some research about him at home.
And I found a BARON had appeared a \'KING\'S MAN\'
>> I found out that Baron appeared in the movie \"King\'s man\"
His role was a \'Valentine\' also bad man.
>> His role in the movie was \"Valentine\" which is a bad man too.
Did you know about that? I was so surprised knew about that.
>> Do you know about that? I was very surprised when I knew it.
Here are your answers:
1. still
>> CORRECT
2. always
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CORRECT
3. already
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CORRECT
4. yet
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CORRECT
5. still
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always
6. still
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CORRECT
7. yet
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already
8. always
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CORRECT
9. still
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10. yet
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CORRECT
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