Homework 5

2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

1.i want to go to down under. 2.i haven\'t seen a new zealander 3.my house and my girlfriend house is near distance. 4.i haven\'t done alcohol measurement. 5.there is reef in everyone life. Expression Which clothes is better.? Which do you prefer to work on? That sounds great. Is it expensive to have for dinner there? Introduce me your friends.

강사 첨삭

Howdy [이름]?


Thank you for your time doing your composition:) Keep it up!


sincerely,

Teacher Lucy



1.i want to go to down under.

>>CORRECT!

>>I want to visit to DOWN Under.


2.i haven\'t seen a new Zealander.

>>CORRECT!

>>I haven\'t met a New Zealander. 


3.my house and my girlfriend house is near distance.

>>My house and my girlfriend\'s house has a short distance. 


4.i haven\'t done alcohol measurement.

>>CORRECT!


5.there is reef in everyone life.

>>There are challenges in everyone\'s life.

>>We find reefs in the ocean.



 Expression

Which clothes is better.?

>>Which clothes are better?


Which do you prefer to work on?

>>CORRECT!

>>Which do you prefer to focus on?


That sounds great.

>>CORRECT!

>>That sounds amazing.


Is it expensive to have for dinner there?

>>Is it expensive to have dinner there?


Introduce me your friends.

>>Introduce me  to your friends.


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