Homework#5
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, teacher~! Thank you for your advices on each time. I\'ll do them you said at all costs
HW#5 How can people believe in truths without evidence?
These are my opnions about your question.
First of all, Many people believe in truths without evidence when they want to rely on something in desperate.
For example, the religion can\'t be proved by using scientific proofs. But many people believe their religion because they want to lean to something or someone.
Secondly, i think the mysteries make people believe them because, it is really interesting. In otherword, they believe easily when they heard some interesing stories or pictures.
That is all... :(
This topic is so difficult to me. I tend to believe truths when they have enough evidences. So, I have never thought about that topic...
Have a good day.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
A HUNKY-DORY MONDAY Morning to you.
How are you doing these days? I bet you\'re quiet well.
Here are my corrections.
These are my opnions about your question.
>> These are my opinions about your question.
First of all, Many people believe in truths without evidence when they want to rely on something in desperate.
>> First of all, many people believe in truths without evidence when they want to rely on something in desperate.
For example, the religion can\'t be proved by using scientific proofs.
>> Correct!
But many people believe their religion because they want to lean to something or someone.
>> But many people believe in their religion because they want to lean on something or to someone.
Secondly, i think the mysteries make people believe them because, it is really interesting.
>> Secondly, I think mysteries make people believe them because it is really interesting.
In otherword, they believe easily when they heard some interesing stories or pictures.
>> In other words, they believe easily when they hear some interesting stories or pictures.
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