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2020-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. I agree that wildlife wet markets should be banned. Because I think it\'s bad hygienically. and wildlife wet markets is mostly illegal. Many people think to eat rare animals make them healthily. But most it doesn\'t prove scientifically. If it\'s possible legally, it is okay. But or not, I think it should gradually disappear. 2. I think wildlife wet markets make a lot of moeny in China So China allow wildlife wet markets and rare animals is very expensive. I think wet market is general marketplace There are so many tourist in wet market And wild wet market is on the street and in the back alley Therefore, it\'s illegal and it\'s never hygienic.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!
~Teacher Lucy

I agree that wildlife wet markets should be banned.
>>CORRECT!
Because I think it\'s bad hygienically.
>>CORRECT!
and wildlife wet markets is mostly illegal.
>>And wildlife wet markets is mostly illegal.
Many people think to eat rare animals make them healthily.
>>CORRECT!
But most it doesn\'t prove scientifically.
>>CORRECT!
If it\'s possible legally, it is okay.
>>CORRECT!
But or not, I think it should gradually disappear.
>>CORRECT!
I think wildlife wet markets make a lot of moeny in China
>>I think wildlife wet markets make a lot of money in China.
So China allow wildlife wet markets and rare animals is very expensive.
>>CORRECT!
I think wet market is general marketplace.
>>CORRECT!
There are so many tourist in wet market.
>>There are so many tourists in wet market.
And wild wet market is on the street and in the back alley.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, it\'s illegal and it\'s never hygienic.
>>CORRECT!

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