Homework

*ESSAY: Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money or some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. When I was in my twenties, I had to save my money to get my house in Seoul. At that time I wanted to enjoy my life, but to save my money I had to be a skinflint. Looking back upon my younger days, I didn't enjoy myself in my twenties, I feel very sorry for me. If I were back to my twenties, I would enjoy my money to experience the world. But I think it is not too late to enjoy my money now. Now I have a house and some money, I can enjoy my life to the full, if I set my mind to it.

Hi [이름]! ^.^ Happy Monday! ^^   In America, most people there prefer to save their money first and consume them in the future. In my case, I really prefer to enjoy the money I earn, but I make it sure that I still save. I can\'t deny the fact that I save a little. Frankly speaking, I just want to have fun. I think it is not really a bad idea to enjoy the money that I earn from working. I don\'t really enjoy them by traveling. I enjoy spending my money by helping my family. I don\'t really save a lot, but it is okay.   By the way, I really admire you. You already have your own place. You have some money to spend for your own. In addition, you may do everything you want. I am happy for you! ^^   Anyway, don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions for your writing improvement. Just remember, it is better not to repeat vocabulary words in writing and speaking. Look for the synonyms. That\'s all for now! ^^ See you later! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     When I was in my twenties, I had to save my money to get my house in Seoul. >> CORRECT! >> OR: When I was in my twenties, I had to save my money in order to rent a house in Seoul.At that time I wanted to enjoy my life, but to save my money I had to be a skinflint.>> At that time, I wanted to rnjoy my life, but to save some money, I had to be a skinflint. Looking back upon my younger days, I didn\'t enjoy myself in my twenties, I feel very sorry for me. >> Looking back upon my younger days, I didn\'t enjoy my life in my twenties, and I feel sorry for me. >> OR: Looking back upon my younger days, I didn\'t enjoy my life in my twenties, and I feel sorry for myself. If I were back to my twenties, I would enjoy my money to experience the world. >> If I were back that time, I would enjoy my money to experience the world. But I think it is not too late to enjoy my money now. >> However, I think it is not too late to enjoy my money now. Now I have a house and some money, I can enjoy my life to the full, if I set my mind to it. >> Now, I have a house and some money. I can enjoy my life to the fullest if I set my mind to it. >> OR: Now that I have my own house and some money, I can enjoy my life to the fullest, if I set my mind to it.